Anyway, claims to "only change one character" are to be taken with more salt than average derp's worth, dressed. It is insanely hard to do, which is why most rewrites end up touching everything everywhere. Rare is the case when the original author fucked up a character only, so their work can be fixed without having to fix anything else about it.

Which reminds me, I should probably do this in English sometime.

For the magic he says he's doing 2, but ends up doing 3 because he wants an elite based on 1 for purposes outside of this or any other story.

Almost as bad as everything else was he used the origin story to create a magical unicorn princess in order absolve himself of all loose ends . Because why should he think a story and an end to the story when he can instead Deus ex Unicorn princess.